My Free Verse Poem

Hope you are having a fun spring weekend!  I was at the beach today and the clouds became the inspiration for my free verse poem.  I can't wait to hear what you've come up with.

At the beach....
looking up at the clouds.
Mesmerized by how they mist across the sky.
Different speeds...swirling around.
Oh, here comes the sun!

I had to think for a while about how to describe the way the clouds moved.  I didn't want to say floated or moved.  I wanted another word to really capture what I saw...they reminded me of swirling water!  Like a light mist!

Cheers,
Mrs. T